🙂 I liked it, it is rushed.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-29 14:32:38I really didn’t care for the ‘Rose’ character in this story. it was just wam bam thank you mamanonymous readerReport 2013-03-28 21:20:33This had so much potential to be a better story. Sex hindi 🙂 I liked it, it is rushed.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-29 14:32:38I really didn’t care for the ‘Rose’ character in this story. To start, the tab key exists for a reason. I’m looking forward to seeing your work again :)«123» To start, the tab key exists for a reason. it was just wam bam thank you mamanonymous readerReport 2013-03-28 21:20:33This had so much potential to be a better story. Next, never write something cliche like `Enough about me`, especially when you have barely written a paragraph about the character.
