maybe in India, but not here! Sex hindi I couldn’t get through the first paragraph because of the gross errors in English, both words and grammar. maybe in India, but not here! FuzzynutZ«12» 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-02-27 21:13:36shame on you this sucks not even a first draft is this bad get a good editor and do a rewrite
remove the intro it is illegal to advertise other web sites here so remove it or go to jail for spammingAnonymous readerReport 2009-06-03 01:28:01be goof if you write abit better and no codes in the story ectREADERReport 2006-06-26 02:38:25UGHHHH ! Guy, you really need to learn English before you try to write another story.
