Keep writing!«12» It does get tedious at times trying to follow the story line. SHIT. Hindi sex video hd Please stop writing and find another hobby. SHIT. Be my mom sis or daugher?:) texy 6025702936anonymous readerReport 2013-09-23 19:46:20Switching points of view between the characters is a technique this author uses in almost all of his stories. Be my mom sis or daugher?:) texy 6025702936anonymous readerReport 2013-09-23 19:46:20Switching points of view between the characters is a technique this author uses in almost all of his stories. It does get tedious at times trying to follow the story line. My question for BLUEHEATT himself is, “Why are you re-posting some of your stories?”
This story was first posted on 06-22-2012, under the same title, almost verbatim, except for the last few lines of the ending.PenKnave193Report 2013-09-23 13:41:48On the whole not a bad story.
