You forgot “What happened to her hymen?”
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Shit story. That’s all you needed to say. No blow job. Glad it was special for you both. Also, you need to break the paragraph each time you add dialogue or change speakers. Glad it was special for you both. It`s as if you were there. Also, you need to break the paragraph each time you add dialogue or change speakers. to paraphrase St Bobo, erotica is pretty straight forward, its all about setting, characters, and descriptions. 10/10READERReport 2005-09-09 15:18:30Hannah: If this is a true story how would you know every thing that was said or done. KREADERReport 2005-09-08 07:20:59Archaic, your ridiculous critique is longer than the story. Glad it was special for you both.
