Anything you want to see from any of the characters?READERReport 2007-10-20 00:16:14meh, it was okay… Grammar is still shit. Indian hindi sex 910«12» ^_^ good plot line though.READERReport 2007-10-13 10:38:09Thanks I copied and pasted it to word to use spell check!READERReport 2007-10-12 10:43:22you have gotten so much better! ^_^ good plot line though.READERReport 2007-10-13 10:38:09Thanks I copied and pasted it to word to use spell check!READERReport 2007-10-12 10:43:22you have gotten so much better! too many grammar mistakes for my taste. you don’t have very many mistakes at all! i really liked it and usually i can’t stand these kind of stories. Anything you want to see from any of the characters?READERReport 2007-10-20 00:16:14meh, it was okay… 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-23 21:35:41Well its way better than the other ones. i really liked it and usually i can’t stand these kind of stories.
