When did this become a lesson in writing and when did people that post on here have to be graded for their contributions? Sex hindi Instead of critisizing just read and move to the next story don’t bring a person down for having the guts to post here. Try separating the paragraphs out so that it is more readable. 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-03-10 20:05:14Are you all kidding me? First is the formatting. First is the formatting. 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-03-10 20:05:14Are you all kidding me? You need to work on your detail and the story length. If you don’t like it them move onanonymous readerReport 2013-02-28 22:16:38I gave you a negative for this one. Instead of critisizing just read and move to the next story don’t bring a person down for having the guts to post here.
